The writing is a bit dense. You would have benefitted from having a couple of blog pages focuses upon one issue or another and making it sparser. Try to go into further detail when analysing the source material so that you pick out very specific ideas.
The writing is a bit dense. You would have benefitted from having a couple of blog pages focuses upon one issue or another and making it sparser. Try to go into further detail when analysing the source material so that you pick out very specific ideas.
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